25/10/11
outta this world holiday
Beep....Beep.....Beep. Screamed the alarm.I tried to ignore it but it was just to loud.I wanted to stay in my dream.My dream outta this world holiday.
In my dream holiday I soared through the air with a rocket to Uranus. I was wearing A fine astro suit with a glass bucketon my head.
Nine and a half years past and I finally made it there it was scary knowing that know one was there, It felt like am the last man standing.
I planted my NZ flag on the planet so when the amrecians come they know an New Zealander was here. I saw somthing reflecting on my flag it was a green glow in the distance. It was coming closer and closer untell.It was a ugly looking alien.
Thanks to Sione and Tomjoe
outta this world holiday
Beep....Beep.....Beep. Screamed the alarm.I tried to ignore it but it was just to loud.I wanted to stay in my dream.My dream outta this world holiday.
In my dream holiday I soared through the air with a rocket to Uranus. I was wearing A fine astro suit with a glass bucketon my head.
Nine and a half years past and I finally made it there it was scary knowing that know one was there, It felt like am the last man standing.
I planted my NZ flag on the planet so when the amrecians come they know an New Zealander was here. I saw somthing reflecting on my flag it was a green glow in the distance. It was coming closer and closer untell.It was a ugly looking alien.
Thanks to Sione and Tomjoe
Wazzup Aidan
ReplyDeleteNice story how many other flags did you plant down?. You should have planted a Cook Island flag.Perhaps you might want to fix up your writing a little.
Shayne :D