war story
“AHHH” It was devastating to see five of my men down and Two soldiers left. as i was going to base i saw a man run up to the barbed wired fence, he twas going to throw a grenade “Ohh no”.I quickly Shot him not noticing i had only a built left. he was still alive, then he throw the grenade NO. I had a pocket knife so i tried to throw it i missed ohh no.
“BOOM!!!!”All of my men were dead.I was looking for a gun so i can kill the man who throw the grenade.I saw a man coming up to me. i hoped it was some to come to my safety but it was just the man who throw the grenade.ohh no i could not do anything because i was hurt.He took me hostage.
Aidan, you certainly have written a tale of desperation! A shame to see, though, that the editing for a published piece lets the impact of the writing down.
ReplyDeleteMr H.